Matt Bellamy

Hello! There is a lot of repetition in here, and when something is repeated once or twice, it works quite well, but if there's too much, it becomes less effective. ...

Hello! I'm not sure what to say to this, I found it rather strange. The end of the first line seemed to be forced to make it rhyme with the ...

I agree with MayApple that the lines are a little difficult to read when they're that long, so maybe try splitting them as she suggested. I also thought the first ...

Hi! This is short and sweet, but I think it could flow a lot better. The third line sounds a little too long and interrupts the flow a bit, so ...

Hello! I really like this. It's well written, has good rhyming and it flows well. However, a couple of lines, such as "Trapped forever in love's labyrinth abyss" were a ...

Hey! This poem has potential. There are a few niggly little things, though - in the fourth line you say "I am scared," and this is very blunt. I think ...

Hello! I usually don't like poems about writing poetry, but this was pretty good. It's light-hearted, just as a poem with this theme should be, and the rhyming scheme adds ...

Hi! There are a lot of ideas crammed into this poem, loads of imagery, and I like it. I like the idea of nights being old. It sounded to me ...

Hi! I quite like the imagery in this - the snow, the rain, etc, though it is a little cliché, waiting in the rain for someone. I like the rhyming ...

I like the theme to this poem, and how you kept it throughout. However, this is a bit confusing, the way it's written: "Bittersweet wind, crisp / stinging my face". ...

The rhyming is indeed forced. You could try just thinking about what you want to say and what you want your reader to get from the poem - that should ...

Hey Amy! I quite liked this because it could be interpreted in different ways, and different readers can apply it to different situations and possiby relate to it, which is ...

I really like this. I don't know the story it's based on, but right from the start, I was pulled in. The first couple of lines were so simple yet ...

This is very interesting. I wasn't sure at first what you were trying to achieve with the italics, but I guess, someone is speaking. I was also unsure about the ...

This is a good start. I think it sounds a little abstract at the moment, and could perhaps do with being more specific - what, exactly, in terms of money, ...